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Worse GM Holmgren or Amaro


Mario99

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Can you use more comma's? Lots and lot's of them.

i understand your sarcasm and irony. Whenever I write on these forums I'm rushing through my post.

however, my original comment was focused solely on the use of "cliches" or "colloquialisms"

Their use is terrible method of writing.

Attend a creative writing course and the instructor and the fellow students will cringe whenever someone uses one. A recommendation will follow suggesting to eliminate the tired phrase from your writing piece.

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@magnumpi

You probably don't frequent here enough to really get the sarcasm, as it wasn't directed at you 100%.

You see lots of spelling mistakes and poor sentence structure, etc on here.As long as there's intelligent hockey talk, I'm good with it. mojo has that covered.

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Stop. As in "Bryzgalov can never seem to stop a breakaway attempt."

Holmgren just can't stop himself from making stupid trades and signings.

I wish Ed Snider would stop breathing.

I wish ResiliantCombatantLXXXIII would either learn something, anything about hockey or stop posting.

But I guess it's really 6 of one or half dozen of the other.

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